Bruised Fruit

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By Don W

To herself she is
a bruised fruit,
moulding on the side,
passing through the stages
of corrosion and decay.

A spare fruit,
spoiling in the calm,
sitting on the lips
of thankless oblivion.

A ruined fruit,
rotting with the times,
Awaiting validation
as an item of consumption.

A wasted fruit,
aging past its use
withering in the light
of impossible love.

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myownworld 2 years ago

I love your poems....they really have such an impact on one! this one conveyed a sense of despondency (like 'wasted' time) so well. thank you for sharing with us.

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Don W Hub Author 2 years ago

Thanks myownworld. I don't know why but I find my poems always veer towards the melancholy. Maybe I should set myself the challenge of writing a 'happy' poem. Stretch myself a bit lol. Thanks for your comment.

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Dolores Monet Level 7 Commenter 2 years ago

Hey, that's me! Sorry, only kidding. It's very sad and a great comment on how we view older women.

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Don W Hub Author 2 years ago

Thanks Dolores. It is sad, even moreso when a woman feels this of herself.

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